A great idea wrapped in flimsy writing is a waste of words.
On the other hand, an average but clearly expressed thought enjoys more attention.
Why bother about good writing practices, you ask? You are a blogger, not a would-be author of the next best-seller.
Don’t fool yourself. You are first a writer, then a blogger. And yes, you are a published author. Your blog is the publication of your ideas.
Even though you are doing good with your current writing style, you will do even better with more refined writing habits. Just like a bad design prevents users from getting to the content, a messy writing style limits the potential effectiveness of your ideas.
To utilize the full potential of your ideas, you have to grow a habit of passing your writing through strict quality filters.
I have always been an advocate of good writing practices. Though, my writing is by no means the best example of effective and clear writing, trying to overcome an old habit is no joke.
Here are the top 5 writing practices that I’ve been trying hard to incorporate into my writing, and that you should also learn.
Writing is about sharing your ideas with your readers. If you are not clear enough about your own thoughts, your readers will also hesitate to continue reading you in future.
An example of doubtful sentence:
I think you should go ahead with your plans.
A clearer version would say:
I believe you should go ahead with your plans. OR, You should go ahead with your plans. OR, Go ahead with your plans.
See, doubt is unnecessary. You are giving your opinion anyway, so why create doubt? When you say I should go ahead with my plans, you want me to do so. I am more likely to follow your advice if you tell me clearly. Prefixing the sentence with doubtful "I think" will rob the sentence of its effectiveness.
Here are more doubt-creating words you should avoid:
I think, I guess, sort of, kind of, well, you know, etc.
Verbs animate your sentences. Without verbs, your writing is lifeless.
Usually, there are many stronger sub-verbs for every main common verb. Verbs that dig out the meaning from the bottom of your ideas. So why settle for common verbs and end up generalizing?
Example of a common verb:
His RSS subscribers have increased.
A stronger version:
His RSS subscribers have multiplied. OR, His RSS subscribers have doubled/tripled/quadrupled.
Whenever you write a sentence, look for the mundane verbs and see if you can replace them with stronger and more precise alternatives.
Some more common verbs and their stronger alternatives:
Dull: He ran. Stronger: He sprinted. Dull: He walked past me quickly. Stronger: He hurried past me. Dull: He changed his blog’s design. Stronger: He redesigned his blog.
This is a common writing advice, yet hardly acted upon by anyone (Yes this is intentional).
Passive voice reverses the action. It’s like watching a movie in reverse mode, where you see the person being shot first, and then follow the bullet back to the pistol and then the shooter himself.
Always highlight the doer first, and guide your readers to his ultimate action.
Example of passive sentence:
His comment was appreciated by the blogger.
Improved version:
The blogger appreciated his comment.
In first instance, your mind is unclear about what is happening until you read the whole sentence. And in the improved version, you see and follow it from the doer’s perspective and reach the conclusion in a natural order.
Bloggers better heed this advice. Your audience comes from different countries and age-groups, and not all of them can match your remarkable language skills.
Use smaller words wherever possible. In fact, search your writing for words that end with "tion" (e.g. initiation) and the likes, and replace them with smaller and less intimidating alternatives.
An example of improper use of dense words:
He exacerbated the situation with his presence.
A better alternative:
He made matters worse with his presence.
Now, it is better to use strong words instead of run-of-the-mill words, but when the choice is between an ordinary word and a specialized but dense word, I go for the former. It’s your own judgement call really. Use what fits the context best.
There is nothing worse in a writing than sentences and phrases that are inappropriately ornate with unnecessary and redundant elements and words throughout the whole and entire piece of writing (phew!).
You can express any given idea in fewer words than you currently use, and express yourself with the clarity you only dreamt of.
Words like "there is, it is, want to, need to, anything, etc." serve to distract the reader’s attention. A tighter sentence with no redundant words attracts the eyes like a magnet, and keeps the mind from wandering off.
Take the first sentence of this section for example:
There is nothing worse in a writing than sentences and phrases that are inappropriately ornate with unnecessary and redundant elements and words throughout the whole and entire piece of writing.
An unstuffed version:
Redundant words ruin the beauty of writing.
Which one is clearer and gets the point across?
Remember, trying to write better is a constant fight against our unrefined writing habits. We have been writing without giving any thought to the process of writing itself for so long, that it is rather awkward picking out flaws in our own writing.
You have to make writing better your habit to become a natural writer just like all those guys you envy.
How much you care about the way you write? Do you think you are expressing your ideas clearly?
Mohsin, that was a fantastic article.
Recently, I’ve been trying harder to improve the clarity of my writing. I’m often guilty of producing long, complicated sentences.
This post will hopefully help in my constant battle to improve.
Jamie, I am glad you find it helpful.
I am myself trying to improve my writing by reading better writers and learning writing tips from the gurus. I hope to share more tips as I learn more.
Something else I don’t like to see on posts, or don’t think it makes for good writing is when the writer says he / she talks about themselves in their writing as having inferior writing… i.e., this wasn’t my best post but…
This goes in with your point, get rid of doubt. If it wasn’t good enough for you to post, why did you post it… sort of thing?
Nice article. thanks. Scott
Great Post as always Mohsin. I am working on improving my writing skills as well.
IMHO, just like with everything else - with practice comes excellence. And that’s what I am striving for.
great writing tips. even though I consider myself a capable writer, it never hurts to read up on tips to try to improve yourself. thanks for the tips
Hi Mohsin,
In answer to your final question, I’m definitely a person who is almost never satisfied with the things I write. Not necessarily the content, so much as the style. I definitely appreciate coming across posts like yours. I’ll do my best to implement some of your tips.
Thanks
OK, I admit, my writings are bad and this post of yours enlightened me a lot. I always wanted to improve and write well. Reading posts on blogs which are being read by thousands is the way I used to improve my writings but obviously, a post like this is more than helpful.
Thanks.
I was one of those “I’m an SEO, not a blogger” guys so that I would have an excuse not to worry about my writing. I just redesigned my blog for the purpose of taking the writing side more seriously. This article helps a great deal. Thank you very much.
Scott, good point. Bloggers shouldn’t belittle themselves.
Anna, experience is something that can’t be learned in one day. As you said, it takes time and practice to perfect any skill.
turtie, you are welcome.
Todd Morris, so am I. One should never get complacent with one’s current skill-set. There’s always room for improvement.
Wayne, it’s about consciously trying write better. Simply reading others will not make you a better writer. You have to know the rules before you can break them. But I don’t think your writing is bad. It just needs a little more clarity to be more effective.
Josh, that’s great! Better late than never.
You know what, Mohsin? I need to go back to my blog to have a look at my writing!
The important thing is to never forget the special bond between writer and reader. That is the key to writing. Know your reader, and create the magic their eyes hope to see. Great article, thanks for sharing!
Wonderful article. These tips are so useful for me. I am not a great writer but would love to learn how to write well. I am sure these tips will turn out to be very helpful for me.
Thoroughly enjoyed this article. This will certainly help me in regaining the focus that I seem to have lost when writing.
Thanks for the tips
Thanks Gareth. Make sure you drop by often for more beneficial reads.